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Lost in my mind.
Don't know what to see.
Feeling so blind.
Lost in the sea.
Can't find the way.
Losing all trust.
Nothing to say.
Everything turning into dust.
Blowing away in the wind.
Too fast to restore.
so far from a mend.
Searching for a cure.
How long must I fend?
©2008-2010 ~Gnattie
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Just a little something that came to me, thought I would put it down on paper. I don't really think it's that special.

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Man, can I ever relate. :/
Shit sucks, Gnattie, dunnit? Can't wait untill high school is over. Things will be so much less complicated then.

It's a good piece of writing, I like the rhyming scheme. It's regular, but, not, y'know? xD I don't. Anyhoo, I like it, you did a good job.
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Good job Nat. I like the the rhyming

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Proud mommy to be!
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You do have such rhythm in this. And as hard and sad as it feels, its true. There are happy parts though...

I think most people can relate, and that is something good to capture in writing.

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